In the sequoia's!

hi it's Nahum sorry i did not writ a story it was Christmas. But here it is!
One day we went to visit the sequoia trees in California. We got out of the car and Mommy needed to go to the bathroom so she went to the bathroom. But then we saw a bunch of water coming out of one of the port-a-potties. So we went onto the trail and then we saw some deer, so i asked Daddy if we could go chase after them. Daddy said no. So we kept walking.  Then we saw a huge tree with a knot on it, so we climbed for a while. And then we went to the other side and there was a huge crack in it. We could all stand in it. But there was an even smaller crack leading SOMEWHERE. Baruch and I thought there was gold. We thought that someone had put a bunch of gold there. So we tried to get inside but I couldn't fit. Baruch could fit, though. But he was too scared. He's scared of the dark. He was five or six at the time. (He's seven now) So then we walked for a long time, and played on the trees, and sharpening sticks. So then we saw a bear!!!!!! With two baby bears!!! Or two baby bear cubs. But it was fine. They were probably a couple hundred yards away. So we walked away. And we kept walking. We made it to the pavement and saw more deer. I asked Daddy if i could chase after them. And his answer was...NO! So then we kept walking. And then I saw a log and I saw something behind it. Then IT poked its head up and it was a badger! So then i started chasing after that. Me and Baruch. So then it must have escaped into the huge crack in the log. Me and Baruch crawled in it, but couldn't find it. So we just kept walking. When we got back to the car, i saw more deer. And Daddy was talking on the phone. I asked if i could go chase after them and his answer was...YES, for a little  bit. Me and Baruch rushed after them, hiding behind trees on the way. I snuck up behind one and when it heard me, it nearly kicked me! But it ran away just before i was kicked. But I was fine. We went back. That was a fun day. The end.